Feedback from Mrs Willcox
- Need a second institutional logo at the beginning of the film
- Look at film title order and change it according to your research
- Need an ending for the opening
- Link mouse used to Mac computer screen so it looks realistic and links to why that clip is larger.
- Have stalker shown on full screen to highlight his importance and what he is doing
Feedback from Ellie Boyle
- Have an ending to the opening to make it look complete
- Make the beginning computer screen shorter as I loose focus
- The computer screen doesn't really make sense with the other clips
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