Rough cut 1

Feedback from our teacher:
We will need to add logos and titles to ensure our film looks professional and everyone gets credited who needs to be.
Enlarge the writing at the start to make it stand out more.
We will need to add more footage of protagonist, to highlight the antagonist stalker, this will make it more intense attracting the viewer right at the beginning to want to watch more.
Add more narrative of the stalkers side of the story, to create an atmosphere and feeling of what the stalker feels when getting information about the people.

Feedback from Frank Large:
Good idea.
Good storyline.
Need to finish it off as well as adjusting some of the editing.
Add more information about the hacker.